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I am just going to throw out there that the red-yellow color idea came from Laura Knetzger. She colored a comic for class like this and I thought it was effective. It's also a good way of fixing how confusing this page could have been. The sound is coming from that yellow room, and before there was no way of telling that.
So, I'm not as brilliant as I seem (because I totally am).