I am so happy no one had problems with this page. Yet. Jenny, James, Michelle, and I had to sit there and talk about this conversation over and over again until it wasn’t confusing. I had to redo it at least 6 times, changing dialogue to being more clear and precise. Someone even read it outloud to make sure it sounded nice. Luckily, I think it works well enough now. The pictures help a lot.

I’ll repeat this information a couple more times. I really like making stories easy to understand. Even the doubt that someone may not understand this page makes me feel uncomfortable.